Thursday, October 26, 2017

100 Word Challenge Week#7

I was just waking up to head downstairs when I felt something bite my toe it was my cat Trico he would always cuddle in the morning.Turns out that my mom got sick and is staying home I wasn't cause I wanted to go to school even if I had a choice.As I was walking to school I stopped by at my friends house we could walk together.After school I cleaned  up some stuff for my mom till she woke up.She didn't wake up so we  all just went to bed and about 5 mins later as the door slammed,I knew someone was there.
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  1. HillcrestBlog3October 29, 2017 at 8:19 PM

    Hello Crazyeyemuffin,
    This an interesting interpretation of this week's prompt. Avoid repeating words in a short piece of writing like this e.g. 'school' and 'walking/walk'. What does the door slamming have to do with the rest of your story? It doesn't really make sense. Well done completing the 100 Word Challenge Week #7.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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