Thursday, November 2, 2017

100 Word Challenge Week #8



   Tomorrow was the day,the day I go to my nanny's place with my sister.We were gonna have so much enjoyment we just couldn't sit tight.Todays the morning me and my sister are going to my amazing nanny's house.We are now heading off to go swimming then were gonna go for a quite stroll.We finished are cool swim and walk so we lit a small flame and placed a soft white cloak on the ground and celebrated my sisters birthday.Then next morning we wen't home and had a special and wonderful afternoon shopping.
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  1. HillcrestBlog3November 3, 2017 at 8:24 PM

    Hello Crazyeyemuffin,
    Your story jumps around from day to day, and doesn't make sense. Stick to one day to avoid this problem. Leave a space after periods. You would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling and grammar mistakes. Congratulations on completing the 100 Word Challenge Week #8.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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